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 I got bored and wanted to write this. I won't start the story until after Halloween, at least. So it does give me time to plan what it will be about and whatever. I really do need some good ideas from people that know about Kingdom Hearts and the organization 13. Oh how I wish my friends Roku and Erica were still around. =.=

Also, I can't put it under a cut since I wrote it on my iPad. It might come out sort of weird and for that I do apologize. >< I hope you will still enjoy it, even if it's not Christmas yet. :D Thing is, I actually wrote this teaser really well and I'm pleased with it.

"Axel, what is Christmas?" The blond-haired by asked his best friend that morning.
"You don't know what Christmas is?" Axel raised his eyebrow as the innocent boy shook his head. "Well... um... some people say it's a time of giving, you know like, to people in need who don't have much of anything." he tried to explain.
"People in need?" the boy continued to blink in confusion.
"Yeah, like orphans or people that are homeless or well... don't have much money. I can't explain it to you because there are things that you'd have to be shown in order to enjoy it." he told the boy as he looked down and climbed out of bed.
The boy looked out the window to see white dots floating down from the sky. He rushed to the window, noticing that this white stuff had covered the ground in icy white blankets. It was everywhere!
"It's snowing!" the boy cried with excitement.
"Oh, Roxas... you're such a child at heart." Axel chuckled as he watched Roxas's face light up in delight.

Date: 2012-09-29 06:41 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] albatrossxwing
I'm Jewish so I can't comment, but I like your style of writing. :)

Date: 2012-09-29 06:55 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] albatrossxwing
I think it's a great idea that Roxas learns how other religions celebrate their holidays. :)

Date: 2012-09-30 05:17 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] albatrossxwing
It's Hanukkah. And :)


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